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gottsu92

2017-05-17 10:22:25

Rush on my face

Hi,everyone!  I'm waiting my turn of a doctor appointment at a hospital now.

I have agonized by long lasted rush on my face.  I think it causes from pollen allergy and yellow sand.  Are there anybody who have same problems?

I hope the doctor could find the cause for the rush.

 

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1: elena

2017-05-17 15:39:03

Hello,
I can relate to your problem. Although I do not have any allergies myself, but my kids do have some unexplained rash spots and runny noses in this season. Our doctor also said that it could be related to "hay fever" or pollen allergy. Yellow sand is scary as well. Whenever it comes, I suffer from headaches and feel gloomy. I think it is important for everyone to take care of the environment more to prevent this things from happening.

Please allow me to suggest some improvements to your essay:

I'm waiting my turn for a doctor's appointment at a hospital now.
I am agonized over a persisting rash on my face.
I think it was caused by pollen allergy and yellow sand.
Is there anybody who has a same problem?
I hope the doctor can find the cause of the rash.

"rush" = means hurry, as in "rush hour"
"rash" = means skin irritation, as in "diaper rash"

Hope this helps. Good luck!
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